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Level 540
Too damn hard
I think ive givin enough chances
Time for action
Goodbye assholes
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Would have been better as a Haiku:
Too damn hard I think
I've given enough chances
Time for action. Bye.
I wrote you a Haiku as well,
Sometimes things are hard
Have you ever stubbed your toe?
I have, it can hurt.
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I knew it was worth it making you aware.
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Or this Haiku
When will some people
See that laughing at others
Brings on bad karma?
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Edit: Should have been in Haiku form
Haiku is pointed
A pin prick or slice to maim?
Your intent I seek
Last edited by Obtuse; 11-26-2017 at 11:47 PM.
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I thought I did fairly well just to remember the 5-7-5 construct.
My garden--once a
soothing retreat bringing joy...
full now of man's thorns
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