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    Level 540

    Too damn hard
    I think ive givin enough chances
    Time for action
    Goodbye assholes

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    Gold Member Obtuse's Avatar
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    Would have been better as a Haiku:

    Too damn hard I think
    I've given enough chances
    Time for action. Bye.

    I wrote you a Haiku as well,

    Sometimes things are hard
    Have you ever stubbed your toe?
    I have, it can hurt.

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    I knew it was worth it making you aware.



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    Or this Haiku

    When will some people
    See that laughing at others
    Brings on bad karma?

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    Edit: Should have been in Haiku form

    Haiku is pointed
    A pin prick or slice to maim?
    Your intent I seek
    Last edited by Obtuse; 11-26-2017 at 11:47 PM.

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    I thought I did fairly well just to remember the 5-7-5 construct.

    My garden--once a
    soothing retreat bringing joy...
    full now of man's thorns

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